标题: 写作指南 [打印本页] 作者: 侯思远 时间: 2021-1-20 08:11 标题: 写作指南 You can use them more effectively by following a few simple guidelines. （通过遵循以下原则来更高效地使用语言）
Ø 1. Avoid redundancy（避免冗余）
It just gets in the way. Don’t make things more complicated than they need to be. （减少冗余信息，可以提高语言交际的效率。）
For example（比如）:
Version 1: When the process of freeing a stuck vehicle that has been stuck results in ruts or holes, the operator will fill the rut or hole created by such activity before removing the vehicle from the immediate area.
Version 2: When freeing a stuck vehicle results in ruts or holes, fill them before removing the vehicle from the area.
Analysis: Version2 要比Version1更好，冗余会让读者很难快速理解文章或者句子的核心观点，对于啰嗦的词汇和句子可以删繁就简。